Friday, May 16, 2008

Where was I going with this?

Madam is finally going to rewrite the first three Silververse stories! Don't worry, the originals—typos, waffle continuity errors, and grammatical mishaps—will be preserved on her site. She is only rewriting for polish and clarity, not to change the plot. I remember reading The Adventures as she wrote it; she posted it on DeviantART before sending it to the Archive months later. I think I mentioned proofreading would be a good idea. But, Madam being Madam, she took a while to break that write-and-hit-send habit.

I had no clue I would eventually fall in love with her (let alone that I would move from Florida to OREGON to live with her), and that I would get to edit these stories. She didn't know there would be stories after the original. I'm astonished by how elaborate and lengthy this series ended up and, speaking honestly, I'm surprised this series got so popular given how muddled the first story is on a technical level. Let alone how LONG it is. Those who suggest new authors should post shorter stories as their debuts raise a very good point! Perhaps people were less scared of new authors two years ago. Either way, I'm proud of Madam for creating something so gorgeous and elaborate, and I'm overjoyed that she's finally going back to apply the polish these earlier stories deserve. I think her series deserves to be popular, but I'm just a bit surprised some of her more intelligent fans were willing to read through it when she was a new author and they had no basis upon which to have faith in her storytelling ability. Apparently these are good stories, and I'm not the only one who saw that!

Our relationship is only slightly older than the Silver series (we met on May 22nd, 2005; she sent the first three chapters to the Archive in November of that year). I'm still trying to get my head around that, and around the reality that I'll be editing what was my first exposure to the world of MC fiction. As much as I bitch about the community, it really has changed my life in unexpected ways. Meeting and bonding with Carin; Doublefine moving here and becoming a wonderfully close in-person friend; another woman I truly hope will become a close friend if only for how much I enjoy geeking out with her; Erika meeting Madam through her podcast post; the various people I've been able to explore hypnosis with from the hypnotist side. Even my earlier time in the Garden was mostly positive. I wouldn't have discovered some of my MC sub-kinks or so quickly grown comfortable talking about this with anyone but Carin had it not been for my encounters there.

Whoops. I didn't mean to get sentimental! Our third anniversary is close, and the Silververse is closely laced with it. Carin is what drew me to this community, and she is what helped me to branch out reading-wise beyond her work while helping me to get over so many of the squicks being sheltered had given me regarding fetishes and sexuality. She is what inspires my life overall.

Writing and editing of the spin-off series is going better than she makes it sound. Writing is slow, but she's broken a new tier of quality and nothing will be posted until November, anyway. Some of the arcs she has planned . . . One infuriatingly vague but yummy hint I can give is Massive's song "Dissolved Girl." I have a shivery, painfully erotic music video in my head of Sylvia and Aurora to that song, and it's definitely not just sex.

Anyway! Madam really does need to post more, preferably when she's awake. I keep bribing her with ice cream. At least make a review post? You did read and enjoy some things in the past few updates. Erika should post, too.

Madam keeps teasing me about having a fetish for semicolons. What can I say? They're cute.

~valbot

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13 Comments:

Blogger Soeroah said...

So I will have no choice but to reread the Origins again? Oh noe!

/sarcasm off

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
LADY! YES! I love the first ones ^_^ I'm not saying the quality went down of course, but Mind Bore and The Lady = uber awesome characters :D And the SS!


Grrr..Carin can I pwwweeeaase have a preview? valbot seems to be taunting us XP And only the system admin can teach her a lesson and I'm no hacker.

Hi valbot :p And thank you so much for this news! May your pleasure circuits be forever activated :)

May 16, 2008 3:32 AM  
Blogger Soeroah said...

After checking that article it seems like something the Chaser would have written :)

May 16, 2008 3:34 AM  
Blogger Wyn said...

Congratulations on three years, Val and Carin. :)

I've been reading the EMCSA since '98, and Carin's [i]Adventures[/i] was probably what got me involved in the community (Actually, it was [i]The Memory Remains[/i]), so I have Carin to thank for that. A rewrite to the original can only make it better, I think.

Has Carin given any more thought to rewrting her first submissions to the Archive? That's a story I'd like to see finished.

Cute semicolons... *grin* At least it's not comma overkill. :D

--Wyn

May 16, 2008 7:14 AM  
Blogger erika said...

Maybe i shoooooould post. But i'm lazy :(

May 16, 2008 10:13 AM  
Blogger valbot said...

soeroah: You reminded me, I have to reread at least the first three stories before she starts working on them. So I have to read the first three about three or four times before this is over. o.O Holy shit that's a lot of reading...

I think the quality went up, personally, but TAoSG will always be special. More Mind Bore would be lovely! Damned authoress killing off the yummy tech characters...

I am programmed to enslave anyone, of either gender, who attempts to hack me; in the event that enslavement fails, I am programmed to self-destruct. Don't try it. ^.~

I had a specific person in mind when I read that article. Shatnerian, commas, for, the lose!

Wyn: I'm confused. What does she need to finish? I don't see anything unfinished on her story list. I also didn't know she drew you in to the community; I wouldn't have suspected that. Semicolon overkill can be worse than Comma Whiplash Syndrome. I should stop posting when tired!

Eri: Stop being lazy! Sparkberry? That'd probably go well with a ristretto...

May 16, 2008 3:10 PM  
Blogger erika said...

Augh, triggers.. mmmmmm...

I, for one, would noooooot complain about more Mind Bore either, though... such a bitch, but.. mmmmmmm

May 16, 2008 3:51 PM  
Blogger Soeroah said...

So valbot, in the event that you DO enslave someone according to your anti-hack software, what would happen to said hacker?





And quit playing on my sub-fetish :p I'm not lucky enough to have been tranced!



Mmmm...Mind Bore...mabye some special features on the website? Deleted scenes? XP

May 16, 2008 11:39 PM  
Blogger valbot said...

soeroah: Sorry. I wasn't trying to play to your sub fetish. x.x I hope you can find someone talented and trustworthy to work with you eventually. What happens to hackers depends on my mood at the time. I would not mind having a barista slave.

Why does FireFox's spellchecker not recognize 'spellchecker', 'barista', or 'FireFox's' . . . ?

Madam mentioned in a site update over a year ago that deleted scenes would eventually go up. Maybe she should look at that idea seriously! I wouldn't mind reading those, either.

May 16, 2008 11:49 PM  
Blogger Soeroah said...

Tis ok :) Thanks for the swift response. Don't know about finding anyone, though.

Barista? My, you two should be careful or you'll end up living in a place like Red's mansion. Or the Lady. And you wouldn't want that, huh?

Waaaaiiiit...



Also did you know that if you type 'competent search engine' into Google, Google doesn't show up? ;)

May 17, 2008 12:26 AM  
Blogger Wyn said...

Not everyone is lucky enough to find a trustworthy hypnotist to trance them... *sigh*

Val, I started speaking to Carin before joining the MCF or the Garden. I don't know if that would be called drawing me in or not, and why it would be of signifigance. She is one of the ones who piqued my interest in robots though.

Deleted scenes might be cool. :)

--Wyn

May 17, 2008 5:30 AM  
Blogger valbot said...

soeroah: Not surprising!

I think Madam would derive entirely too much pleasure from that particular bit of programming being activated.

Wyn: Most people we know who are really involved in the Garden, particularly with a certain group, either want nothing to do with Carin or are publicly polite to her while being antagonistic in private. You don't match either category. You're the least Garden-like Garden member I have ever met, so far as people who are deeply involved there and with that group go. That's why I was surprised.

She made me consciously aware of my robot fetish, too.

Lesbians and bisexual women have a much better chance of finding 'tists, but the search can be a long one. You'll end up with someone worth the wait.

May 17, 2008 12:36 PM  
Blogger Wyn said...

Thanks, Val.

Okay, thinking about The Adventures of Silver Girl, I can't seem to remember what happened to Windy.

--Wyn

May 17, 2008 6:49 PM  
Blogger Soeroah said...

Yes, Windy just kinda vanished. Hopefully she didn't wind up on display at a bed shop.


It just hit me that this means Silhouette will be back ^_^ Even if it's basically the same thing, still ^_^

Also Val, what programming? Or are you refering to an older comment I made? And not that it bugs me or anything but I'm just wondering why my name doesn't have a capital? Lol :)


Hi, Wyn, enjoy Confessor as much as I did?

May 17, 2008 8:35 PM  

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